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CORRESPONDENCE _9 S p l i t t i n g Hairs New York, N.YI To the Editors: Ronald Christ, reviewing Suzanne Jill Levine's translation of Manuel Puig's The Buenos Aires A//air (June 24)...

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...Levine of "illiteracy," "tone deafness" and other sins, yet apparently is able to provide only two examples to substantiate these charges...
...The second is the seeming misuse of the word "fornicate," which appears in the text as a transitive verb...
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...For instance, the leaky boats crammed with Vietnamese on high sea and open ocean are no phenomenon of a sudden urge to travel for travers sake...
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...It was a self-defeating debate for the peace activists, as no one stood to gain other than possible rhetorical victory...
...The first is a single instance of "comma splice": that speck of mispunctuation, known to induce fits of indignation in junior high school composition teachers when they discover it, as they often do, in classics of English prose...
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...More sadly, the contention was defeating in terms of its essential topic matter, for lost in the welter of words were the problems of a substantial number of Vietnamese...
...The appeal quickly spun off an acrimonious argument within the peace community about the purity of concerns and respective vulnerabilities to the claims and counterclaims of parties at interest in the Vietnamese issue...
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...ELIOT WEINBERGER REPLY: Rereading my review (in(Continued on page 543) NEWS & VIEWS: 514 CORRESPONDENCE: 515 EDITORIAL: 515 WASHINGTON REPORT: K i l l Him, Save I t : Frank Getlein 516 UPSET AT THE POLI~: Desmond Fisher 518 A MEMORY AND A CONTRAST: Peter Steinfeis 520 LA UN-DOLCE VITA: lohn Ahem 521 THE BISHOPS PLAY III01VOPOLY: Daniel Morrissey 528 T I l E PRESS: The Night The L i g h t s Went On: Thomas Powers 530 THE SCREEN: Colin L. Westerbeck, It...
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...To the Editors: In my review of Michael Grant's book, Saint Paul (Commonweal 104/14 [8 July 1977]) an editorial embellishment of the text has made me sound disparaging to "sociologists," and I should like to correct that...
...Levine only of performing in the past with "grace and wit" and of not always being "in good voice at this l~rformance...
...Levine's work as a translator needs no defense from me: I have praised it orally and in print many times...
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...Last spring, on what seemed indisputable evidence that the new government in Vietnam was not living up to its proclamations and the hopes of its friends, the American peace community addressed an appeal to the government of Vietnam asking that it honor the concern for human rights which it had expressed both in formal agreements and innumerable conversations with peace activists...
...CORRESPONDENCE _9 S p l i t t i n g Hairs New York, N.YI To the Editors: Ronald Christ, reviewing Suzanne Jill Levine's translation of Manuel Puig's The Buenos Aires A//air (June 24) accuses Ms...
...444) I originally wrote, "But in the last analysis, it [Grant's book] is Paul for the sciolists:" If that sends you to .the dictionary, then my point will have been made--unless, of course, it was a printer's devil...
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...Moreover, the Church's radical stand on the development of Third World people, beginning with Populorum Progressio in 1967, again called to public attention in the Call to Action of 1971 and the bishops' synods of 1971 and 1974 and implemented in the Detroit Call to Action Conference of 1976--ten years of intense action and reflection--is not among the variables measured at all...
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...Surely the affirmation of and resistance to the Church's stand on peace, poverty and human rights--the themes of Pacem in Terris--had an impact on some of the Catholic population, especially those with college education on the one hand and those with Third World identity on the other The operational definition of favoring Vatican II changes is weak, as is the evidence that people accepted Vatican I I changes...
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...Weinberger will also reread what I have written--this time with something more than occasional attention to the language--he will learn that I have, to use his word, "accused" Ms...
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...Levine's ability to transform the complex texts of Cortazar, Bioy Casares, Cabrera Infante and Sarduy (to name only a few) into remarkable English prose...
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...OOOOOOOOO CORRESPONDENCE (Continued /rom page 515) eluding the botched metaphor), I see none of the harshness Mr...
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...Readers and translators of Latin American literature, including myself, have long admired Ms...
...Precisely because I am aware how easily errors infiltrate publieations, I was scrupulous not ot attribute any blame and went on to say that the "off-notes," of which I gave two examples, were "easily correctable by a copy editor...
...RONALD CHRIST Corrections In Marilyn Moorcroft's article, "Floundering With Grass" [July 81, the paragraph on page 435 beginning ".No matter...
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